Wow! I really, really loved the story you were telling and the presentation was so unique! Awesome job!
I did notice a tiny typo that I thought you might like to know about. In the third still on the second row you say 'the first i time saw you'. I think you meant 'the first time i saw you'. -smile-
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Date: 2009-11-19 03:10 am (UTC)I did notice a tiny typo that I thought you might like to know about. In the third still on the second row you say 'the first i time saw you'. I think you meant 'the first time i saw you'. -smile-